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You're my last hope
My last chance
Can you take that pressure?
Can you save me?

This unbearable sadness
That never ends
Haunts me everyday
Choking me now

These attacks of fleeting panic
No reason to be afraid
Yet I can't stop shaking
I can't catch a breath

My attempts at freedom
The knife I held
far too many times
Nearly tasted my blood

I don't want them to know
That would kill me faster
My mask holds me together
Without it, what do I have?

I don't believe in Him
he has never helped me
If he was real
I wouldn't be here on my hands and knees
Begging you please

So what do you think?
You're my last hope you see
You're the only one I can see
that could possibly help me

These words you give to me
Make me want to run and hide
Curl up around myself
Cover my ears forevermore

These words mean
NOTHING
and
EVERYTHING
to me

You've failed me
You were my last hope
Now I'm all alone
Now I have nothing

You could've changed it all
But now I'm left without hope...
With no weapon
no army
no strength
I can't win this war
This was written last year after I went to a counselor for help...you can all see how that turned out.
But now I have my music so... ... yea!


Holy crap! I just realized how long my poems are, sry!
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FogandDreams Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012
Candy is right we are here for you Ace! And we will always have each others backs!
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bleedingAce Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2012
Yeah! :D (ps nice knight)
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FogandDreams Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2012
yay lol
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6-9Changeling Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
"But we will win this war. We can start again." If only Chealy came to us sooner, right?
Chelsea and I will save you Ace! Always, we'll be there; ACK have each other's backs!
This poem really stikes to how we feel sometimes. I can't believe how well you can capture the feeling, dude.
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bleedingAce Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012
Yes!! & Yeah! We gots an army now!!!

And thanks, dude :happybounce:
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6-9Changeling Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yeah!!!

No probs! Its incredible!
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